We my class of 22 including Mr.Solarz started in independence Missouri. We got there by a teleporter when we were on Mars. We had smashed a guy that had a bunch of gold. We got lucky and just took it. So we needed supplies and we decided to get oxen which was great but we got Conestoga wagons. That wa bad so we lost some money but traded them out for Prairie Schooners. We whent and forded a river a lived. But Alison lost a foot. We kept going taking a few breaks but when we got to Fort Larime a few things happened. Allison is fine Aidan is sick and is staying behind. Hanna is staying behind to because she has a crush.
I am a water molecule. I have few friends that stick with me forever but sometimes I see them. This time I'm going in some guy. Oh he sweating. I'm going through now. I'm on him. I'm on him and just sitting here. No. Im falling. I tumble through the air to the ground. I hit it with what seems to be a thud to me is maybe a little pop to these human. I'm in a gym and there's sweat everywhere. I see Bob my friend molecule. Hes evaporated. I'm perspiration which is when I evaporate from a human. Me and my buddy's are hoping to meet up at cloud. After a minute I was in a cloud. I saw my friend.
“Hey I came from transportation you know the plant one.” My friend said.
“Yeah I came from the human.” I answered. Then Bob came up. Apparently he just came from accumulation the one from the ground. We were all condensing. We started with condensation though. Then we saw something. we never noticed it but there was millions of molecules. Before we could say another word. Bob fell under the floor. So did hundreds of others. I fell. I was going through the air. We all were going through precipitation. I was falling but I was thrown back. Again and again. But after a few time I saw Bob he stuck me with other others to. We were turning in to hail. After a few more time we were a piece of hail. We got gusted again. And fell.
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