OBSERVATIONS WHILE EXERCISING
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OBSERVATIONS WHILE EXERCISING
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Skill DrillBefore:
Journal Prompt: Write a story entitled, "The Amazing Qualities of the People in my Writing Circle!" Compliment everyone at your table in some sort of way, being specific, but avoiding passive voice and avoiding the words listed above. When you feel yourself wanting to write those words, make sure to replace them with better choices!!! This story does not have to focus on a moment, but should be from YOUR perspective. You can't use
The Amazing Qualities of the People in my Writing CircleThere are a multitude of good qualities that the people in our group possess the ability to wield.
Oh, Brady the great Brady. He is accomplished in sports and he is able to play them excellently. Brady is dedicated and he practices hard at hockey and the other sports he plays. Lucas is extremely nice and helpful. Whenever I have a question he can help me in a nice way. He also makes me laugh. Addie is smart. She is good at solving big problems in math. She gets the right answer quickly and efficiently. Addy is Creative. She is always coming up with new and inventive ways to solve problems. My Observations.
Final Reflection
My other aliens.
Skill Drill The zipper that was halfway closed. It had a little piece sticking out of it. It was scrunched up at the end because of the ring. My backpack also had a rope attached to the back of it. It has two zipper compartments and is blue I look up and see what looks like a backpack. Wait, what? Since when are backpacks bigger than me? Is this a dream? It sure feels real. I see a zipper hanging down and attempt to run up it. I get caught in a pocket and need to pull myself up using the edge of the grey and black zipper. I run up grab hold and am swinging upwards… Wham!! My head hits the edge of something that looks like a giant trampoline. I do it again because it doesn’t hurt and eventually I let go at the right time and land on the top of the backpack.
There is another zipper and I quickly scale it. Whoa!! You can see for feet from up here. I see a bunch of other backpacks and jump from one to the next, gradually picking up speed and then misjudge the timing for the next one...
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