When we first started our journey to Oregon, we had to make some decisions. When we bought our wagons, we made the wrong decision. We bought the most heavy and not best wagons, the Conestoga's. During the trail our oxen were tired out and so when we got to our first wagon trader we said we would give you these for the prairie wagons. He said no but the next one said yes but the deal was a little high, we took it any way. From walking for so long all of us got blisters, one person had a terrible infection from walking across the river. Her name was Matilda Faulk. She had to get her foot cut of and it was devastating. It got worse but she is still alive. Later on a boy got a very bad sickness and had to stay behind, at fort Laramie. With another girl who fell in love, there names were, Iskandar Alatas and Alexandrine Haberle. We are moving on with our journey and with what we have.
One day I was just floating in the lake surrounded by all my little molecules friends. As we were streaming along i felt something weird… I couldn't see my friends I was invisible! Oh my gosh! I was getting evaporated. This was so exciting and scary because It was my first time but I didn't know what to do. So I just sat there thinking what would happen next. But as I was waiting I saw something. As I came closer I saw a giant cloud and then I was stuck to it! Was this supposed to happen? I think it was because I heard all of my friends say we made it! So I asked the molecule next to me what happened. He told me that all of us just got evaporated into a cloud. And we were all condensed. He explained everything and what it meant. I thought to myself oh I just went through a lot but it was exciding. But then I had nothing to do so I just listen to what other people were saying and how they felt about this. But then again there I was feeling something weird… We were moving to another place dark and gloomy. “Oh no the dark side!!!” I yelled
“No silly we're going to be precipitated” Oh that makes a lot more since I thought to myself. But then as I saw my friends leaving I wanted to join. But It was to late and the cloud got blown away to another place. When we got to the place we were going to be released, All I saw was a garden… but way bigger, A jungle. The cloud stopped and I saw more people getting released. Then my time came. I was just at the end and I dropped. I was falling so fast that I hit a tree. But as I was sitting on the branch of the tree this long tailed brown furry monkey looked me in the eye. He hopped away but stepped on me I was all over his paw. He licked me off and later he was sweating and I fell with all of my friends again in our home lake.
Science Fair Presentation- First Draft
Science Fair Presentation- Improved version
Reflection: I think the science fair was valuable because it could be used for when we are older for more presentations. I made some mistakes but I learned from them by slowing down when I talk so I don't stutter. If I could do something different I would re due some of my answers to the kids questions, to word them better.