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Chingoon
1/3/2017 12:33:50 pm
So the thing I like about your video is that you listed all the questions before you answered and the question, The quality booster I have is to say that you should had to was that you should have like shown sketches on like what dances they did if anyone wanted to do like real dances and you can explain why you show sketches that were printed or drawn.
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Abby
1/3/2017 01:08:41 pm
I really like your idea of sketches but I would probably do the printing just because, the drawings that were on the website were really good.
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Michelle
1/3/2017 12:49:14 pm
I liked the video it was very nice. One thing that you could have done is that you could have shown more of the dance moves because I feel like that would help us understand better, but other wise I liked it.
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Michelle
1/3/2017 12:50:15 pm
And you also could have put a link to the website! :)
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Abby
1/3/2017 01:11:50 pm
I really liked that you thought that I should have done lots of different dance moves. I couldn't really do many of them because I didn't have enough room. I tried to put a link to the website that I used. I am sorry.
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Anna K.
1/3/2017 12:51:16 pm
You did really well providing the information that was needed to be given. I had some troubles with the camera but that was only a problem in the beginning. I had moments were the noise screeched out but overall the video was great. The information was great but I think you focused on explaining more than reading your questions. I like the end part but I don't thing it was necessary. Great job! I really think I learned more watching this video!
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Abby
1/4/2017 02:59:27 pm
It was a little hard for me because that day we had a sub and I couldn't sit on the floor. It was a good spot to be and I could hear myself talk. I can't really help with the screeching. I am sorry. I wanted people to really understand what everything meant. But I see what you mean. I will try and work on that. I wanted to do the end part because then people would be able to understand what some of the moves were. Thanks for your feedback.
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Madison
1/3/2017 12:53:42 pm
I really liked your video. I liked that you showed some of the moves and compared it to what dancers do know. Something that I think you can improve on is talking a little louder because you can hear the people around you. Also, you might want to try being a little more organized because you kept looking down and your sheet and pausing to look at the notes. I liked that your reflection said a lot about your project. I think that you did a good job.
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Abby
1/4/2017 03:01:58 pm
I thought that I did a good job but at some moments it was really hard to talk because people around me were being loud. I should have maybe been a little prepared or done it in a better spot. Then I can look at my notes but nobody would know. Thanks for telling me that my reflection was good. Mr.Solarz had said that I needed to work on that.
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Ashley
1/3/2017 12:57:56 pm
Hi Abby, I love how you told many things about what the did. It was very fun to watch. I think maybe you could have tried even though it is super hard. To find different facts because it is kind of the same things. I really enjoyed your passion time project. I love what you did!
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Abby
1/4/2017 03:04:37 pm
I do think that most of the facts were the same. It was a little hard finding good facts because this happened a long time ago. All of my facts were about dancing and how they do it. They did though sound like I was just saying dance moves and some other facts. Thank you for telling me that you enjoyed. I am so happy you did.
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Catelyn
1/3/2017 01:08:13 pm
Abby your doing a great job this a great post! The only thing I would change is making the text a bit bigger! Great job!!!!
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Abby
1/4/2017 03:06:06 pm
I am a little confused on what you mean. Do you think that I should make the text bigger? I think that is good. I hope that people who need to have bigger text would be able to read my post.
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