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8 Comments
Madison
1/3/2017 12:30:08 pm
I really liked your video and how you read all of your notes and explained your thoughts. I also like that you clarified something that may have been unclear. Some feedback is that if you had your graph printed, (Which you may or may not have done.) I would have showed it in the video to get a better understanding. I think overall that you did a great job!
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Anna
1/3/2017 01:08:53 pm
I appreciate the feedback part a lot because I never have thought of that! Thank you for the comments they were awesome! That feedback was a great idea and will think of that next time!
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Ashley
1/3/2017 12:45:27 pm
Hi Anna, I love your project. It is set up very well. I have one little suggestion but it is kind hard to change. It is that the graph is a little to small I think it would be good if it had more dates and if it was bigger. In the video it was kind of hard to follow along and a little confusing. But besides that is was a great job with long answers.
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Anna K.
1/3/2017 01:11:05 pm
Thanks for the great suggestion of the graph. Sorry if it was confusing next time I will make sure to be sure it is describing and well thought through. Thank you for all the good feedback as well!
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Hailie
1/3/2017 12:45:56 pm
I think you did an amazing job explaining everything that might not have been clear. I also think that you explained you notes and your own thinking very well. Some things that I think you could revise is maybe to have some sort of a visual on a piece of paper or something. Also I think that you could of said something other than facts. Overall I think you did a great job!
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Anna K.
1/3/2017 02:57:57 pm
Thanks!! I am happy you liked it. That is a great idea than just saying facts the whole time because then the video will be more interesting. I am wondering about the visual part but I kind of get it? Thanks Hailie I appreciate it!
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Abby
1/3/2017 12:49:33 pm
I like that you picked a topic that people really know a lot about. I think that you did a lot of really good stuff. Your KWHLAQ was amazing and I think that your reflection was long enough. I think that you should try and not have to many facts and at the end try not to say things that you have already said. At the end of the video, I started to get a little bored because there were so many facts. You really made sure that everyone was able to hear you speak.
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Anna K.
1/3/2017 03:00:59 pm
I will try not to get as many facts next time but I felt like I was using my time wisely getting the facts. I did realize I repeated myself which is something to work on its just I want to make myself clear enough so people get what I am saying.
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