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Jody
1/3/2017 12:19:21 pm
The chart is really good but maybe make it like a poster because i could not read it. The start is good.
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Jody
1/3/2017 12:21:53 pm
I like how your telling about details on them and etc. Sometimes it was hard to understand you.
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Jody
1/3/2017 12:26:58 pm
A tip is to put your script on post it notes on the computer so that you are more easy to understand.
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Jody
1/3/2017 12:23:54 pm
I like how much your saying like facts and how they are made but maybe have a smile on your face. Everything is good.
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Jody
1/3/2017 12:31:29 pm
This is interesting and really detailed but make sure your looking at the camera but this is really good.
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Jack
1/3/2017 12:46:43 pm
I really liked the video and I learned a lot. The only things that I have to give you feedback for is, 1. Next time, try and go to a place with better lighting because it was hard to see you. 2. is that make sure photo booth is flipping the image because your ven-diagram was backwards so I couldn't read it. Other than that, the video was great.
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Charles
1/3/2017 12:50:15 pm
Got it, thanks for all the information.
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Charlie
1/3/2017 12:57:57 pm
Overall I really like the video but I have some ideas to make it better.
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Charles
1/3/2017 01:05:56 pm
Ok, my next LAQ will have the best info I had.
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Daniel
1/3/2017 01:07:08 pm
I liked the video and that you had so much details but some times you were kind of talking fast and also you were talking a little choppy but it was an amazing topic and I loved it. :)
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Sam
1/3/2017 01:09:08 pm
That was a good video and was filled with facts! Some things I think you should do for the next video are: Not rely on your notes so much. On some parts of the video, you were looking at your notes for what to say and other times you looked at the wrong thing and said something different. Also, remember to capitalize your title for your video. Another quality booster is that the graph was backwards so next time remember to turn on flip in edit. I also liked the way you really showed examples with your hands throughout the video.
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Charles
1/3/2017 01:12:04 pm
Yah I noticed that the graph was upside down, sorry.
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