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Anita
11/29/2016 10:04:14 am
You seemed to be very interested in what you're trying to teach and seemed to have researched some information about google cardboard. I think you should've did a better job describing what these are for and why people like to use them.
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Cole
1/3/2017 12:44:00 pm
I really like the idea of building a VR Google Cardboard headset for your mini ipad and I hope you finish making it. A few things that I think you could work are explaining a little bit more of how you would build a VR Google Cardboard headset for your mini ipad and not focus as much on what the VR Google Cardboard headset is. Also I think that you should've probably filmed in a different place because I had trouble hearing and focusing on you because of the noise. Also I would like to tell you that overall I think you are really good at making videos and you are very confident when speaking which really helped the video. One more thing that I think you should revise is the title of the video because when I watched it I was a little confused about what you where doing, besides that I think you did a great job in making your passion time video and I enjoyed watching it. I also think that you should edit your blog and fix some of the pictures by turning light box on because I had a hard time seeing the image. You could fix it by turning lightbox on. I think that you did a realy good job making your blog post and video I really liked them both.
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Connor
1/3/2017 02:13:45 pm
I will try to fix the images but i thought i had light box on already. THX
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Calvin
1/3/2017 01:00:09 pm
I like the length but you need to sound more enthusiastic about your videos. You also need to answer all of KWHLAQ questions. You also shouldn't repeat yourself so much just to make a long video.
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Charles
1/3/2017 01:00:30 pm
Fix your title so the I is a capitol.
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