Ashley (Partner)
1/3/2017 12:33:00 pm
Calvin I really liked what you wanted to learn and how you showed us but I have too tell you some suggestions and feedback (Mr.Solarz said we had too.) The first thing is that you only have kwh and no laq and the kwh is doubled. But it is ok we all make mistakes. The next thing is that in your trello card it is really blurry and still really small when I clicked on it. I cant even read it. In your video it was really hard to hear. But it was fine because in mine you couldn't hear it at all because I forgot to turn on the microphone. The last thing is that it was hard to understand what you where saying and a little confusing. So if I were you I would have made it a little longer and explained it better. I loved your project and want to know more about it because of your video. I could tell you worked hard and it was stressful it was for me too. Both of your were not perfect it was the first round and it was stressful and new.
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Kyren
1/3/2017 12:53:13 pm
I liked how you listed all of the muscles of the mouth. Another thing that I liked is that you showed a picture for the mouth(that gave me a visual). Some friendly feedback that I think you can improve on is that you didn't follow your question and you only have a KWH. I also noticed that your photo is blurry, I also noticed that your notes didn't make sense(but they were very cool). Over all your passion time project is very scientific and it is very very cool!
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Calvin
1/3/2017 01:11:17 pm
I did not have time to make an actual prototype mouth
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