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I learned that doing stuff like this is fun, and cool. Also I learned how jelly beans were made, If you want to read about the proses read the L in my LAQ. My favorite part was the making of the jello for my project, and the video. For me it was hard to get the video dune in time be for the dead line. The easiest part was making the jello, or the video. If I did this again I would add more text to it, and more images. If someone asked me to tell them about my project I'd say it was fun and cool. Also I would say it was a fairly hard project, and to not eat the jello they make, because it could make you very sick, And it is gross.
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Isabella P.
4/5/2018 01:06:56 pm
First of all, your video was well thought out, in my opinion. But my suggestion for you would be to talk a little bit louder because I couldn't really hear you, so I couldn't fully understand you. But when I have the sound up all the way, I could. Also you could consider making the video a little bit longer as well. That would make it so that the person who was watching the video could process all of the information that you are saying, and you could tell the viewers if they could make it themselves or to, like how easy/hard it is. My other suggestion is to put lightbox and/or link the picture of the jelly beans, in case someone needs to see it bigger, and for the picture of the Trello card that you made to make that separate pictures so that it is bigger, because it still wasn't that big, even with lightbox on it. But overall, your project was really good. I like the question because it is unique and interesting, and your jello filled cups with the grass, paper, and dirt. Those are really interesting flavors. But your passion time project as a whole was really good.
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Mikey S
4/5/2018 01:20:04 pm
Thank you for the tips I'll make sure I talk louder next time so they can hear me better. I like how my trello card is but I will think about that in my other passion times. I will fix the jelly been photo so it has light box on. I will try to make my videos longer in the future. Also thanks for the complements. I will do my best to fix all of your points so my post is better.
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Caitlin F.
4/5/2018 01:11:06 pm
Hi :) I think your video/blog is interesting, I love jelly beans! Some things I think you could work on are:
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5/28/2024 05:55:06 pm
Theresa Thomas, from Omaha, is my name!
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