Some of my GLOWS so far this year in writing include:
My contribution to the discussion:
- I go back and reread.
- I am not repeating words as much as I used to, but still do sometimes on accident.
- I have good and strong word choice
- Expanding my paragraphs
- I think i can improve on not repeating thoughts so much in my writing.
- I think I can benefit from describing in to detail more things in my writing.
- I feel like my writing would be much stronger if I used more sensory details.
- I feel like I should pay more attention to how I am wording things,because sometimes it does not make sense.
- Also I feel like I should make my paragraphs a little longer, so it does not seem like a 3rd grader is writing it.
- they borrowed ideas from other people
- They both are very good with people
- Write about started 12 years
- they both are teachers
- almost 100 people
- started with around 19 people
- making all of the videos took 2 years
- Mrs.V wanted to be a teacher when she was about our age
- They both love writing
- They ask real kids for writing samples
- They teach based on the list of standards for each state
- they think about their audience
- they make their own characters
My contribution to the discussion:
- How do you come up with the lessons, and what to say?
- I read a sentence from my book A Million Things
- I shared one of my grows
- I asked a question
- Questions from Mrs.V
- What some of your grows?
- How are you liking the captivation station videos?
- What have you learned so far from Write Steps?
- I asked her,