“ I dare you. She said.
“Dare me to do what?
“Eat that sandwich.” I was so frightened Alison dared me to eat the sandwich. I went and grabbed the sandwich off the ground. I took one bite and was miserable. Alison started laughing like a hyena.
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When I went to lunch today there was a sandwich on the ground. It was disgusting, there was grey mold around it that looked like it was going to climb on the sandwich. Then Alison came by and took a good look at the sandwich .She saw that I was looking directly at it.
“ I dare you. She said. “Dare me to do what? “Eat that sandwich.” I was so frightened Alison dared me to eat the sandwich. I went and grabbed the sandwich off the ground. I took one bite and was miserable. Alison started laughing like a hyena.
3 Comments
taylor
2/6/2015 01:26:12 am
this is very good but very disgusting there is a couple little mistakes but it is good
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Grace
2/6/2015 01:31:05 am
that was a very great story with descriptive language. There was a couple of errors.
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Ms Woodgate (Team 100WC) Maidstone, Kent.UK
2/6/2015 05:26:32 am
Hello,
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