Directions: Copy and paste the "Before" sentences into a text box. Then correct them on the right, using the ideas from above.
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Journal Prompt:
Write a story entitled, "The Amazing Qualities of the People in my Writing Circle!" Compliment everyone at your table in some sort of way, being specific, but avoiding passive voice and avoiding the words listed above. When you feel yourself wanting to write those words, make sure to replace them with better choices!!! This story does not have to focus on a moment, but should be from YOUR perspective.
Write a story entitled, "The Amazing Qualities of the People in my Writing Circle!" Compliment everyone at your table in some sort of way, being specific, but avoiding passive voice and avoiding the words listed above. When you feel yourself wanting to write those words, make sure to replace them with better choices!!! This story does not have to focus on a moment, but should be from YOUR perspective.